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It's really hard to tell what's going on when you have 3? characters that are all center-screen staring at camera, and fast cuts. Think about where the characters are in the scene, where they are looking, how they are reacting to each other
The arms, frames 76-84, is off-model and needs work. The rest of this is reasonably decent. I actually think this is one of the better 2D entries I've seen this month.
mans eye was wonky fix it next time
im removing 1 star away for his wonky eye
im giving 1 point for the solid animation and a whopping 9 points for the beautiful art
Animator: Siena Beardmore
Description: A group of very normal kids trick or treating when one of them declares to have seen something…quite odd. Is one of them hiding a secret!!
Experience: 1 year and a half
Time taken: 6 days