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by 段焮川

Final Rating: 4.11. Finished 79 out of 125 entries.

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Animator: 段焮川

Description: 两个小伙对屋外一闪而过的黑影展开激烈的讨论

Experience: 2个月

Time taken: 2个星期


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Julian Dill:

The animation on the character on the right is a lot better than the one on the left, which needs a lot of work.

Liam Smith:

You could zoom in the camera and have poses stay on screen for longer before changing pose

Reginald C Pumpernickel:

I feel like you overexaggerated the expressiveness and speed of the characters to the point of it feeling like they're both on crack. If you calm down and simplify their movements it would look much better. You did do a good job of having both characters appear as active listeners when they aren't speaking though, which is something many people struggle with.