Heist gone wrong
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Nice storytelling ! Some movements seem very extreme and need more anticipation/easing.
the framing and poses are really nice, I feel like with some polish, this could be really good! Building up moments of anticipation, overshoot, etc. could really help with the moves. It seems like you're over-acting during the "not batman, but like..." section. We don't need a visualization of every key word!
Lovely, fun setting and a nice pay off! I like the very first reaction of the startled panic against the door. Very fun!
Description: Two dudes getting very legal money, but the city is well protected...
Experience: 8 month
Time taken: Very long