Comments:
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Alfin:
Too fantasy look, just focus on the gesture
Leonardo Pereira:
Looks good, nice staging. Try to check the match cut between the shots. Everything needs work to polish but is a great start.
Ben Zingo:
watch some of the other entries for this month! It seems like you could have explored some other acting choices, there's a lot of shrugging here, and some more variety would be nice!
Animator: Fatemeh babazadeh
Description: The boy wants to attract the girl while he is desperate, but the girl rejects him sarcastically and is leaving.
Experience: 1year
Time taken: 3 weeks