Final Rating: 5.30. Finished 46 out of 183 entries.

544 views including the voting period.


Animator: Jordan Coles

Description: A bank robbery ends in a climactic standoff between the assailant and the witness...

Experience: 2 Years

Time taken: 3 Weeks


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First shot zips by and is too far back to see acting. Final shot is also too far zoomed out. Camera focal length change could have helped.

Robert Cartwright:

Love the theme you went for! It's a little hard to see the other man's facial expressions from that far away, maybe try to exaggerate his movements just a little more to make up for it. Otherwise, well done!

Aaron James Mongcopa:

2nd character is so small on screen you can't see his dialogue and facial expressions.

Elisabeth Janerka:

Nice idea, but the very first shot is useless as you can't see what is happening at all

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

Really neat!