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The animation is really fun and expressive but your framing and camerawork is all over the place. Would have worked much better if you'd have focused on framing one or two really good shots/angles.
camera movements feel very unnecessary
There are some good poses even thought it is floaty at times, I suggest to not use so many unnecessary cuts as this could easily confuse the audience.
C h o c o b i l l y :
Camera is out of control.
The camera would probably have been better with less cuts (one or two good framings showing both the body and the expression). A few breakdowns could help a lot as well, because some movements looks a bit robotic.
Simplify the camera? Super distracting that the framing switches every 50 frames or so
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:
Nice for a start, but everything is still too jumpy, especially the camera cuts. Do you even need that many?
Description: Two guys show up at a costume party dressed the same!
I have used the Max rig by Peter Starostin and James Hunt. Thank you, I would love feedback so I can improve.
Experience: I'm a University student - so still learning.
Time taken: 16-18 hours spread over a few weeks