Final Rating: 5.74. Finished 28 out of 229 entries.

288 views including the voting period.


Animator: Aidan Lonergan

Description: Two friends go back to visit their old school to see how things have changed

Eleven by:
Mr Buttons by:

Experience: Student

Time taken: 2-3 weeks


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Lip syncing on point!

Aidan Lonergan:

Lip sync is a little off, Eleven's mouth opens and closes too many times. Also, the story is a little hard to follow

Conway Dobbs:

The oh part for the mouth movement needs work it feels too slow for the word. The pleasant line the mouth moves too fast. the 'you' wind up to that line is too dramatic. you don't need a wind up. What scares them and where are they? Over all though as you can see I have had to really look at it. The animation is nice for the most part and I like the lighting. Good job keep it up!

Aidan Stokes:

Good animation and great lighting! "Coming from the walls in here is too jumpy" lessen the scale of the mouth movements. The faster the talking the smaller the mouth movements and the slower the talking the bigger the mouth movements. All in all I'm quite Impressed!

Vedanth Panchoo:

What are they looking at?