Final Rating: 3.47. Finished 151 out of 229 entries.

233 views including the voting period.


Animator: Christabella

Description: A conversation between Ryan and Daniel in an old building.

Experience: few months

Time taken: about a week


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Camera switching to reveal second character is very fast. Second character appears to barely move at all aside from his arm and face. The first character is better, but still a little stiff.

Conway Dobbs:

nice but needs work

John Vargas:

two suggestions, if I may. When the character says "pleasant" , it sounds like he is hesitant with a hint of fear, in my opinion. What if you emphasized your character's emotion when he says the word? I feel like you have the right track when the character says "not when the history fights back." it just needs to be slightly reinforced. Perhaps a slightly faster head movement? again, just a suggestion and my opinions. Overall, I think you did good work!