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captured by pirates

by Amani H.

Final Rating: 3.51. Finished 147 out of 229 entries.

210 views including the voting period.


Animator: Amani H.

Description: Treasure hunters get caught stealing from some pirates.

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 3 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Liam Martin:

shot choices are decent but you should try to apply more of the 12 principles of animation, specifically solid drawing in this case


For the contest, the animation runs too long and doesn't need to. The establishing shot is nice, but doesn't need to last as long, even if it wasn't for an 11 second contest. Also, I recommend touching up the animation on the prisoners, they look as if they're vibrating at times. Overall the design of the ship and characters is nice, and you clearly had a fun idea for this audio.

talha bin khalid:

Well tried. I like the timing & good artwork.