« Back to October Competition

Shocked

by Efrat Lapian D

Final Rating: 3.34. Finished 137 out of 187 entries.

429 views including the voting period.

◀PREVIOUS
▶NEXT

Animator: Efrat Lapian D

Description: A girl shocked because she hears a loud voice

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 2 days

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Trenton Goodwin:

I am not sure what is going on. What is the character reacting to? Are they saying jesus cause they're scared or that what was scary turned out to be harmless?

Andrew Bower:

The camera cuts across the 180. She's looking at opposite sides of the screen in the different angles. If you cut and she was looking towards the same side in both shots, it would flow better.