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Roll, fall & nothing @ll...Or!?

by Ivan

Final Rating: 4.24. Finished 89 out of 187 entries.

429 views including the voting period.


Animator: Ivan

Description: It was rainy night in front of the hotel lobby, poor girl misplaced her keys somewhere... "Lady Killer" approached her. Moment he wanted to reveal his true intentions... DESTINY start spinning wheels discovering goodness in both of them...

Experience: 10 + years

Time taken: Two weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Chanel Maria Novela:

the audio doesn't really match when the guys falls

Stéphane Sartori:

Some good poses, however you need to work a lot on your timing. Everything is moving at the same pace and it's too slow.

Ben Hall:

This needs a lot of adjustments to the timing to make the animation less floaty

Trenton Goodwin:

you're trying to do too much, work on quality over quantity. Also use reference

Sean Goggin:

Funny concept, but animation felt a tad swimmy.