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What We Do Before Going To A Bal

by Aneesa

Final Rating: 3.87. Finished 71 out of 134 entries.

393 views including the voting period.


Animator: Aneesa

Description: A vampire and a human deciding what to dress up as for a ball... full of vampires.

Experience: Beginner

Time taken: 2-3 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

J.K. Riki:

I like the animation on the clothes at the end! The characters feel a little stiff right now, so getting some more flow and life into them would be helpful. Try to work a little more messy, so you aren't worried about final lines so soon. Final lines should only come after everything else is really well animated. :)

Todd Christiansen:

Solid line work, but there's not much... animation


Oh man, I loooooove your character designs!! Your lip syncing is pretty good, too. The one thing I would critique on is the movements-- when he raises his arm in the beginning, it feels very sharp and almost angular, and same goes for the head movements. I would recommend studying and practicing Ease in and Ease out (one of the principles of animation) in your next piece! Great job, I'd absolutely love to see more of your work!