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Slap(stick)ing sense into you

by Luke Coleman

Final Rating: 3.20. Finished 97 out of 134 entries.

317 views including the voting period.


Animator: Luke Coleman

Description: After my first submission last month, I took the feedback provided and worked a lot more on blocking and curves. I even tried to animate a small little quadruped that's reacting to the conversation, although it could still use a little work.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 30 hours


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Laurent Châtellier:

Violence for free...

Jean Lamy:

This is over animated. If there was less movement, it think this would've been a nice concept. Focus on the two human character's first before jumping in with another character, especially a quadruped. Take it step by step.