Final Rating: 3.83. Finished 74 out of 134 entries.

390 views including the voting period.


Animator: dileep kumar

Description: Please watch and give me your valuable suggestions.

thank you.

Experience: Am pursuing now,and i have 3 months Experience in learning stage.

Time taken: 1 week


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Janelle Klenzing:

The first character speaking seems a little over-acted, especially in comparison with the second character - all the extra gestures don't add much past a certain point. He also doesn't seem to look at the second character at all, so while the second character reads as having a conversation due to where he's looking, the first character is just standing and speaking.


Well the voice 1 acting a bit strange voice 2 looks much better

Eric Heaton:

The Screen Left characters acting is very unclear. He is doing too much, I would simplify it alot and put more emphasis on a few clear key poses

The screen right character is not bad. His mouth opening on frame 75 is too slow and even. Also his lip sync is slightly off