by dileep kumar
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The first character speaking seems a little over-acted, especially in comparison with the second character - all the extra gestures don't add much past a certain point. He also doesn't seem to look at the second character at all, so while the second character reads as having a conversation due to where he's looking, the first character is just standing and speaking.
Well the voice 1 acting a bit strange voice 2 looks much better
The Screen Left characters acting is very unclear. He is doing too much, I would simplify it alot and put more emphasis on a few clear key poses
The screen right character is not bad. His mouth opening on frame 75 is too slow and even. Also his lip sync is slightly off
Animator: dileep kumar
Description: Please watch and give me your valuable suggestions.
Experience: Am pursuing now,and i have 3 months Experience in learning stage.
Time taken: 1 week