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Ooh, I like the idea on this one!
Some good ideas, just needs to be fleshed out more
The second character that comes in from the roof isn't really animating or doing anything he is just stuck in one pose.
Also check your characters head volume around frame 262 its changing size
I like the unique approach to the storytelling here!
Animator: Lillianna Craighead
Description: Child is reprimanded by father for wanting to dress up as Blade the Vampire hunter.
Experience: 3.5 years as a student
Time taken: week and a half