Final Rating: 5.48. Finished 32 out of 161 entries.

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Animator: Mirmohammad Moghimi

Description: Please eCritique My Animate. Thank You.

Experience: 5 Years

Time taken: 2 day


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Ramon Arango:

amazing posing!! really cool and readable. I don't really get whats going on to the end though... Is he running around the red guy really fast, while the red guy is surprised that his lightsaber disappeared?? And then the blue guy throws his sword and then his epic faces falls into the frame... So the animation is great but I really dont get whats going on.

Sandra Ines Tapia:

Very nice animation, I just didn't like the pop-up image at the end.

Lim Hoe Kit:

More of a personal thing I suppose, but I really don't feel that the sfx matches the first half of the duel. Also there are a lot of held frames which causes the clip to stutter a little. Apart from that, cool stuff!

Samantha Schnauder:

I like the animation, but the sounds in the beginning are not meant for contact. When the contacting sounds are also used for the same action, there is a disconnect.

Brad Bradbury:

There really isn't a reason for the extreme eye close ups.
Especially the last one.

Dexter Saulisbury:

Cool idea! The sounds don't quite match up tho.


Very cool. It looks like Aha's take on me video.

Frankie Wright:

Some great facial expressions and movement


Good references to the "Star Wars" theme. Good fencing fight. Good facial animation and camera takes. May be developed further.

Eddie Higgenbottom:

maybe a little bit more polishing good job


Nice solid drawings, but it reads more like a live action storyboard than a finished animation. It would look rad with finished breakdowns and inbetweens though!