Final Rating: 5.11. Finished 38 out of 144 entries.

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Animator: MJDK

Description: A guy walks in his workshop to find his dog eating a scale model car he made.

Experience: 2½ years

Time taken: I spent between 0 and 3 hours a day animating throughout the month, so hard to say

Comments:

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Jimmy Horner:

Not bad, I think you can emphasize that bounce as the speaker sits down. Overall good job though.

Owen:

Maybe the start could be a bit more active (at a run/ mouth bigger - more enunciative) but leads into nice gestures with the man and great touches with the dog. Camera's sudden shift to the dog is a little distracting, though I get you were trying to hold the mystery for just a bit longer what he was yelling at.

J.K. Riki:

It would have suited the banging sound effect better if it had been a wooden chair and he lifted it up and shoved it back down before sitting. Cute concept otherwise!