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Don't eat my GTO !

by Leeroy

Final Rating: 3.10. Finished 118 out of 144 entries.

79 views including the voting period.


Animator: Leeroy

Description: Bigfatstrong eats my gto...

Experience: student

Time taken: 3-4 night


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Dieguito Pritchett:

camera shake WAY too distracting

Puja kundu:

Couldn't comprehend the camera shake.

Jimmy Horner:

The camera is shaking a lot, the speaker doesn't act very well in this scene you may need a different character show the emphasis of emotion.

Christian Greyeyes:

- Camera shaking which will risk distracting viewers
- Can't easily tell what's going on
- foreground character is dimly lit

Dan Paris:

tough to see the lips. Timing or the lips were off from the clip. Lacked action when little guy was getting angry.

Eva Elmo Leung:

Camera shaking! Why is the camera shaking?! GAH!

Tobias Egeli:

i really wonder what went through your mind? What is that chest, why is there an earthquake and so on.

Amartya Mukherji:

why is your camera shaking?


Took me a while to figure out it was a bedroom. Needs nursery wallpaper or something. Main character is walking mostly, not hopping or gesticulating the emotion. Camera shake is distracting (if that was on purpose). _Love_ the giant baby - I think I could watch that bearded baby antics much longer. This could be really fun with more work.