Final Rating: 4.18. Finished 71 out of 144 entries.

62 views including the voting period.


Animator: Arthur Collie

Description: A man's large, robotic friend goes out of control.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 1 week


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I can't see the little guy. Sorry.

Dieguito Pritchett:

work a bit more on staging... I feel that I'm watching the robot the entire time because he's so huge and dead center of the screen and I don't get a chance to focus on your character's reaction... always remember to allow the viewer to focus on your characters' performance especially after all the work you did to animate them

Alex Mlqd:

We can't see the acting/lipsync. Try to make better choice about composition, framing.


good but too much twining and no overlap at all

Oliver Pedersen:

Many poses stick too long


When I see the size of the robot, I expect he is the main character of focus, but the small man is doing the yelling, a little confusing. A close up of the man with the big robot in the background may be more relatable. I like the basic gestures you chose for the man, they work.

Yuki Radcliffe:

The movements are really good. I think this animation would benefit from some more close-up time on the human character's face.