Comments:
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Tierra:
Amazing acting! I like how the camera slowly reveals the other character. The tied up character feels alive and increases the tension of the scene. The lip sync is a little off but the expressions and staging are very good.
Erriana Thomas:
Your staging and composition do a great job of supporting the story. One thing I noticed is that the silhouette of the dark knife sometimes gets lost against your character’s shirt and the darker walls in the background. Adjusting its material or color so it pops more could really help. Overall, your animation is well done, and the timing of the character’s movements fits nicely with the audio. Great work!
Drake Bell:
I really like the reveal that you have here as well as your finger and facial animation, especially with your work on your main characters mask! One thing though that I think would improve your animation just a slight amount is a quick camera switch to show the horror on your secondary character's face to being tied up and threatened with a knife.
Animator: Nikhil Anurag
Description: A Man who committed a crime and got away with it. But the Main Character is out for vengeance.
The last time I did this challenge was February 2019. Come a long way since then. Hope to get much better in the future.
Experience: 4 Years
Time taken: 10 days (Worked on it on and off)