Ari Z.:

Nice twist at the end! To make Neka’s movements more realistic, remember that our shoulders rise whenever we take in big breaths. I like the hand movements you had her do while she was avoiding having to tell Ray she burnt her muffins, along with having her avoid eye contact before she broke the news! For Ray, I think you could push his demeanor alot further considering he would be able to see the kitchen actively ablaze.

Sofia Delgado:

the breathing is extremely distracting.

Aaron James Mongcopa:

Better not join next time if you're going to submit garbage. You're just wasting out time. thanks.