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Pensando en la bañera

by Sarah Rivera

Final Rating: 4.03. Finished 158 out of 243 entries.

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Animator: Sarah Rivera

Description: El personaje tiene una platica profunda con el mismo

Experience: no tengo mucha experiencia, es la primera vez que participo

Time taken: 2 semanas

Comments:

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Jonathan Higareda Diaz:

You've got nice posing, the animation could have used more inbetweening to smooth it.

Rhys Davey:

f189 - looks like SL arm is broken in that pose. Take a photo of yourself trying to do the same and observe how it looks from the spine, shoulder, elbow and wrist.
Context of the shot isn't completely clear. Not sure if he's talking to himself or the ducky.
Hold the pose at f190 for 'Real'. Then go to the pose at f230.
Resting his hand on the side of the bath doesn't really work.