Gabriel Magalhaes:

nice!

Rhys Davey:

I like the idea. The effect you added is very cool.
251 - I think you should leave the camera in this position rather than swinging back again. Then the mini angel should take small steps closer to her to deliver 'What's more real...'
Spacing - There's lots of big antics, arcs and breakdowns that make the motion very choppy
ie. "This moment is.."
If you take f37 and hold it for 12 frames, then ease nicely to f55 it would make the motion much more fluid.

Ruben Uggla:

Possible winner here

Veronica Kudina:

Great job on the animation! I think the camera movement works well in revealing the second character. The hair looks flowy with overlapping movements. I would love to know more about the story and the characters. The hand of the little girl looks a bit stuck from the complete lack of movement in the palm in the second part of the animation. I would recommend adding light up and down motions as she moves her fingers starting around frame 235. Overall, great job!

Jidapa Nithirangsee:

amazing