Comments:
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Kalliope Draga Raptis:
Aww!! This is so cute! You could of made this piece more interesting if it wasn't too stiff, overall it's good!
Vicent Matoses:
the effort and willingness is there but you need to improve drawing skills. good job anyway
Rhys Davey:
Staging is a little high. Drop the camera angle and try to center the main action.
Camera swinging one way and then swinging the other is disorienting and doesn't help.
Plus you break the 180 degree rule a few times. Google it and you'll see what I mean.
Ambitious shot though, its always good to test yourself.
Keep at it, look at reference, really learn your fundamentals and you'll be on the leaderboard in no time.
Ben Zingo:
when using camera cuts, be careful about "the 180 rule"
Animator: Isabella Commey
Description: A girl dreams of a loved one, and has to leave him behind as she wakes to return to the real world.
Experience: 1
Time taken: 3 weeks