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Some parts get a little stilted. Remember that secondary action and settling with forearms and pigtails!
I love the environment! Your character's movements also feel natural, except for most of the timing. Most of the time she's moving at a very constant speed and her motions lack purpose, especially in her arms
The magnifying technique is really cool! You should focus on the eyes and eyebrows to make them more expressive.
I would add more facial expressions to your character. How do they feel? Does it match the tone of voice and body language? Great work!
Animator: Paul Boogaards
Description: A girl finds a deadly frog.
Experience: 5 years of school
Time taken: 4 weeks