Final Rating: 3.53. Finished 98 out of 130 entries.

1,192 views including the voting period.


Animator: Rachel Stuart

Description: Entry for the November Competition.

Experience: Student in my Second Year

Time taken: Around 2 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Stephen Quenet:

Could be a lot more expressive and the lips don't always match


It's a bit stiff. Might want to think about adding some holds, slow ins and slow outs. Break up the hand movements and add some finger movements. Add some more facial expressions. Keep going!


Almost there. He needs more motion between his main gestures. He stops dead quite often and feels quite stiff. The constraint on the paper doesn't seem to be working and that was distracting.

Colleen Moore:

The paper seems to moves on it's own. This looks a little weird.