Final Rating: 4.29. Finished 61 out of 130 entries.

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Animator: Ariane Torelli

Description: A quick animation, I would appreciate any feedback

I had done a full background for it but I ran out of time for rendering haha
so I will post that in a week or so =)

I used 3ds Max and Corona renderer

Experience: Studied Animation + Does animation for fun

Time taken: 2 days


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Jean Lamy:

The poses are nice overall. The lipsync could use some work. You can also benefit from using the main fluctuations in the speech as where to make certain gestures. The character on the left is too still. You could make her shift her pose perhaps.

The spines are too stiff though. Good job.

Robin Pfister:

they are very straight, maybe you could try more dynamic poses, and more clear movement.

Tom Islava:

The timing in the torso felt abrput in some places. But other than that, I thought the scenario and the acting felt very sincere.

Andrw Yair Guio Gonzalez:

It's good, but it need to be more fluency