Catherine:

It's a good start. You have your main poses. Now you need to keep going. Figure out how they're getting from one pose to the next.

Stephen Quenet:

This is more of an animatic, great drawing though.

Diane Aarts:

nice drawings, incomplete

Tom Islava:

keep adding more breakdowns and inbetweens and you might have something awesome, because your draftsmanship is amazing and the interactions between the characters is believable,

Kieran Mann:

Good movement of the characters but this looks more like an animatic.

Kess Duhamel:

I like where this is going! If you get around to smoothing this piece out I bet it'll look great!