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It's a good start. You have your main poses. Now you need to keep going. Figure out how they're getting from one pose to the next.
This is more of an animatic, great drawing though.
nice drawings, incomplete
keep adding more breakdowns and inbetweens and you might have something awesome, because your draftsmanship is amazing and the interactions between the characters is believable,
Good movement of the characters but this looks more like an animatic.
I like where this is going! If you get around to smoothing this piece out I bet it'll look great!
Animator: Shuaiting Chen
Description: for some reasons I can't finish this animation（πーπ）
Experience: 5 year art collage, 1.5 year after collage
Time taken: 1.5 week