Final Rating: 4.57. Finished 70 out of 192 entries.

501 views including the voting period.


Animator: Shiloh Z. Vanaver

Description: Hand drawn on iPad with Pencil in "Rough Animator."

Experience: 20 years

Time taken: 2 weeks


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Anais Larocque:

Nice poses, but confusing storytelling.

Forrest Stull:

I like the characters a lot! Fun facial expressions, secondary elements and acting choices.

Ramsey Pierson:

I admire your tenacity to animate this completely on 2's (or 1's, the player wont let me scrub every frame)

However I feel like it also is hindering your character performance by having them move TOO much. You need some time for them to hold their pose so the audience can digest the scene you've set up and read their emotions.

John Tyson:

The dragon is all over the place, give him fewer poses and commit to them, make him look like he's reacting to the little guy, plus make the little guy actually move more with what he says, give him more body movement.



Brian W.:

Simply amazing.

Zachary Checkeye:

The dragon's a little too overly animated, there is no pause at all in his actions, he's constantly in motion, like a run on sentence.