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Luke going to college
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Floaty eyes are very unnatural. Try record yourself do the scene or specificly watch peoples eyes to see how they move around. The animation could also use some ease in and out.
Really nice twist at the end. Guy in the car was a little too smooth and mechanical. I like the way the kid looked away when he said "not afraid."
William Barry Eggington:
Not a bad idea. Weird camera motion and everyone was quite stiff though.
Animator: Maayela Garza
Description: It's time for Luke to go to college. He doesn't want to dissapoint his mother... IT'S COLLEGE! Dissapointing is part of it.
Poor Luke, there are a lot of things he doesn't know yet...
Experience: 6 months
Time taken: 3 weeks