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you should shoot some reference
In the beginning during the "I won't fail you" He's not moving. You can never stand completely still. There are some subtle movements you can add to fix that.
"Floaty cams are RARELY a good thing. I'd suggest you remove the camera movement at frame 48 to a cut to the position at frame 162.
Just like the student, keep the "coach" (im assuming) from being completely still. Also, I'd slow down the turn around.
William Barry Eggington:
Lips seem way off. Wacky camera motion.
Mainly in the details.
Animator: Fausto Murillo
Description: A young boxer is preparing for tonight's match, but little he knows who is he going up against to. Maybe a surprise is expecting him on the ring
Experience: 4 months (Animation student)
Time taken: 2 weeks