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Life his little finger twirl and his expression on his second statement. Just needs more movement to make them look less stiff.
Take care about the composition of your frame.
William Barry Eggington:
Seems cut off or stretched or something. Strange. Parts are done well. Like his motion into the desk on his chair. But the rest is a little lifeless.
Animator: Flighty Alpaca
Description: First time to let the character speak. If you have time to give me some advice, I will very appreciated! :)
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 2 weeks