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I love that you took that last image from brother bear, nice. the animation on the old guy is great! i love how you showed terror in his face Good Job
very good, I like the subtle movements in the "wise old man's" face, and you've shown a reasoning for the response which overall really adds to the scene
Love the anim on the old man :)
William Barry Eggington:
Mixed styles on the texturing is off putting. Awkward camera motion at the end. Faces are pretty well animated though.
Nice work! I feel like the dialogue of the second character is a little more intense and focused than you animated, but the feeling of an old man that you gave him was really great!
Sandeep Kumar Kispotta:
gr8 job with expression of the old guy........
loved the fear on the old guy, great work... definately the top 5.
the second shot is really good, but I think the first shot lacks impact
love the lip quivers on the old man before he starts speaking
awesome expressions.. superb
Very nicely done. Animation is good and the story is also very clear.
Jo Anne Tan:
Such beautifully subtle animation! Only complaints I have are the old man's too-symmetrical eyebrows, and the pan to the cave wall is a bit cheesy. I already understood that the warrior will be going on a dangerous mission, so the wall drawing wasn't really needed and it broke the tension of the whole scene.
Animator: GokulNath Gajapathy
Description: Young man from the tribe promising to his old chief ,that he wont fail this time and he is ready to fight the monster.But old chief recalls his horrifying experience with the monster in the past and warns young guy.
Experience: Few years ..
Time taken: 1 week