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You should be afraid
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It looks dramatic with this black and white. For animation maybe you can ease in and out the animation, move the body as well so not just the head. To make it more lively.
Lip sync not bad, but that's about all I can comment on. Needs more movement and reaction.
William Barry Eggington:
Kind of a neat stop motion look. I like that.
Love the silhouette on the models! Movements are a little rigid.
this has a stop motion feel to it...is it 3D?
Jo Anne Tan:
Animation is too stiff and jerky, check your curves in the graph editor.
no offense but i suggest you should make more hand gestures
Description: The characters were downloaded from the website "Blend Swap".
Experience: I'm studying animation for three years
Time taken: 2 weeks