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I want to become independant

by charly mauri

Final Rating: 6.50. Finished 13 out of 223 entries.

1,551 views including the voting period.


Animator: charly mauri

Description: I don't think so...

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 1 week


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Juan Carlos Vigil:

Animation is great, I just think it needs more story

Mike Schanbacher:


Remi Thewissen:

Nice facial animation on the second character and his body language. The lipsink on "Afraid" could use some work though, especially in the "ai". The shoulders are quite stiff on the first character too, if you loosen them up, you could push the action and the emotions. I like the eyes on both though.

William Barry Eggington:

I like it. Kind of has a weird drifting. . . motion capture feel to it though. Might want to watch that.

Michael Kristiansen:

Really nice, very well done. Only thing that bothers me, is the first guy looks straight ahead, when in fact the old guy sits rather low.

Amartya Mukherji:

Overall animation is good.
FULL MARKS FOR THE FINAL FACIAL EXPRESSION. loved it. It reminded me of Anthony Ego from Ratatoullie