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I'm not afraid !!
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animation is ok... but try making the clip more interesting by adding a back ground story.
Really liked the facial expressions of the first guy. Wonder if it would have added something to have the second guy turn a little bit. They both just stay in their positions and never move.
William Barry Eggington:
Holds are too held. Kind of. . . stiff. But not bad.
Well done I like it. Some more secondary animation or overshoot would polish it nicely I think. Especially the first guy and his mouth, which seems to snap and stay for too long in the different cylables.
Description: A talk between a young man and his mentor about his future
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 4 days