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I won't fail you
by Lee Mun Wai
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lip-syncing needs improvement
William Barry Eggington:
Touch stiff and the holds are odd. Like the torso just gets locked, then released. . . then locked again. Quite distracting.
Pretty good. The book freezes in air as the rest of him moves. That's just unlikely in real life and distracts from the action to me. Like the way the second turns and dips his head.
Too many linear motions, and a few arms popping
Animator: Lee Mun Wai
Description: I just want to describe a son don't want make his father disappointed.
Time taken: a month