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Haha... funny idea.
I like how you have an extra character. THis one is hilarious!
Good work, but George Steven's lipsink could use some work and so could his poses at the end, he seems very stiff. Good concept though and great job on Malcolm
the beginning is really cool! he does cast a double shadow on the wall when he approaches it (frames 160-190) which make it feel off, however i'm confused in the story context with the rings at the end? I thought he was the father of the girl he is sitting next to and the guy running is the boyfriend, so i would imagine that he (the father) would be upset (?)
William Barry Eggington:
Wow that's a lot of effort. And very well executed. Good job.
Great work on the animation that precedes the dialogue, but I don't understand the context or the relationship of the characters once the dialogue starts.
is he afraid of piercing ? animation is good though :)
Haha nice, I didn't get the story until the end, well done.
I don't think the story is very clear.
Some might think that the dad in the car is proposing..
Nice surprise ending! The opening was well animated, even though it didn't have sound. Maybe a touch long there, but since it was nicely done, no complaints here. :)
Jo Anne Tan:
Very nice animation on the malcolm, and I had a good giggle at the way he ran after getting up. Animation on a whole is nice, but the man in the car looks quite floaty compared to the rest.
Animator: Irakli Kiladze
Description: father want to wed her daughter, but guy negate and try tu run from this situation
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 10 nights