Domenic Serena:

Audio slows for some reason

William Barry Eggington:

Black eyes?

John Fielding:

i wish the second shot was super tight on him, but overall this is the first submission i've seen that seems to have a legit setting that matches the tone of the clip.

The big guy could use more body mechanics and overlapping parts in the way he swivels in the chair and in the turn. In the professional world, this would be a great first pass to build upon and add subtleties and nuance