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by Shawn Lee
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Very clever good job! great use of ethos the only critics is that i would like to see the first fish say the hole first phrase but thats just personal opinion, very nice job
That is a nice fish animation. really fluid!
your plot is quite interesting. only afew things that i would like to say, just my opinion. you could have shortened the animation preceding the dialouge. the small fish could be made visible some frames earlier while saying i wont fail you. both the chef's hands in the end are quite frozen. i liked the acting of the big fish. all the best
The only thing I think could use improvement is the chefs themselves. I know they're not the focus of the scene but sometimes they remain a bit too still.
Other than that it's great!
Wow this one is very nice. i LOVE the fish idea
William Barry Eggington:
Great idea. Cleanly executed. Great job.
Really nice animation! I think you could get rid of the shot looking at the cooks backs. Its a bit confusing, at first i thought the cooks where the ones talking.
Cool idea and animation. Bravo!!!!!Top 5
great idea...loved this one :)
This is so dark but the animation looks really, really good! Both of the fishes fits pretty well with the voices and even though they look alike, you can feel they're different characters by the acting. The younger chef on the other hand could have been moving a little bit more.
Jo Anne Tan:
The animation is so good! But it was hard to tell who was actually saying the first guy's lines.
Animator: Shawn Lee
Description: I won't fail you
Experience: Degree in animation
Time taken: 5 days