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I'm not entirely sure what the guy in the blue shirt is doing during "I won't fail you" Remember that it's easy to overact. Sometimes less is more.
I really like the poses between frames 155 and 185.
Work on timing. Remember slow in's and slow outs along with holding a pose for a bit of time.
I really like the small little hair adjustment the girl does around frame 170. Those small things add so much and bring her to life.
Nice idea. Might of worked better if the first guy's motion had come a few frames later. The second guy's actions were good, but just didn't seem to fit the soundtrack to me.
William Barry Eggington:
Little over doing it on the "acting" but. . . I can see where you are going and it was a good idea.
Jo Anne Tan:
This feels rather overacted and over the top. Technique-wise it's not too bad but needs more depth and thought in acting choices
Animator: Harold Riverol Echemendia
Description: This animation is about the feelings inside the head of a boy before a date proposition. Made with Blender
Experience: 4 years
Time taken: 1 week part time