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Animation needs a lot of work, but I did like the gag at the end! Work on more full body movement rather than just animating the parts of the body that are "essential" to the motion. (like moving the shoulders/torso/arms when the focus is on the lip sync) and motion/acting even when the characters aren't speaking.
Put a little more movement in there when they're not speaking and some anticipation, ease in, etc. to take away from the computery look.
William Barry Eggington:
Needs a lot of polish. I would focus on some strong poses and secondary animation to improve it.
Animator: Patricio Saenz
Description: Not limited to animation projects
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 3 weeks