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Young Llama's Rude Awakening
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Much better than what I first saw in the WIP forums, the walking on the fat guy still looks a little too robotic.
needs more work on the walk but nice animation anyway
Great concept! If you are going to do this kind of animation where your "actors" don't have a easy way to express themselves you need to rely a lot more on the body mechanics and the performance. Take a look at this https://youtu.be/PYzeqTFsXXY?t=25s
last dialog lip sync is very good, it will be even better if the same lip sync is followed from starting.
A bit mechanical. Apply some anticipation and ease in and outs.
William Barry Eggington:
Awkward motion .
Animator: Stephen Wilson
Description: A young llama thinks he's ready to join the ranks of the great pack animals like his father, transporting travelers across the desert. But his first customer may be more than he bargained for!
Experience: Student - around 2 years
Time taken: 2 weeks