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Hey! Try to add some holds to your animation :) You dont need everything to be moving the entire sequence. That way you will have more time to play with timings! Like when your character hits the table with his fist, anticipate it and then make it hit the table quickly with the hand and then overlap the torso and the head.
Watch the timing and snappiness of some of the movements, particularly the slamming of the fist on the table. I like the floating character though.
William Barry Eggington:
Very stiff and the timing seems quite off.
liked the unexpected entrance! maybe double down on the comedy by having them poke out upside down or something ;)
Animator: Adam Porcelli
Description: "luke" gets freaked out by random "yoda"
Experience: just a bit, took a class or 2 on animation
Time taken: roughly 4 days