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work on staging and composition of the shot.
Could use a close-up shot from another angle
Really like this. Good acting, timing, everything. Only thing I'd change would be the camera angle just before he throws down the book so you could get the full effect of his menace. Maybe a little bounce on the book too to show it's weight and the force of the throw.
William Barry Eggington:
Not too bad. Weird seeing the same character talking to himself.
Jo Anne Tan:
First guy's hands are twinning a lot in poses and timing, and there needs to be improvement in the movement arcs. A lot of it looks stiff and jerky.
Animator: Boon Chien Ng
Description: The employee is going to sign a contract with another company, but he is timid and doesn't want his boss lose confidence in him.
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 3 weeks