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Talking to yourself
by Ali Jacobson
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the lip-syncing needs improvement the lips don't move that much and the jaw just goes up and down. the exadurated facial features on the second character looks good but the first one looks a little dull
William Barry Eggington:
you you will will be be.
You are not suppose to modify the sound.
Audio issues aside, I feel that the characters are too static throughout, and I'm not sure that thumbs bend like that. Work on adding more motion, as humans are a jumble of fibres working to keep you up. You're never completely still.
Animator: Ali Jacobson
Description: school project
Time taken: month of november