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The Rookie Cleaner
by Phill Clough
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Amazing concept! For future animations try to breakdown your poses a little more. Because now you can clearly see when your keyframes are and what is being intepolated by the software. Keep it up!
Pretty good acting and a good idea. It may just be the camera angle, but the green guys pose looks like he would fall over. Also, I had to go back and look to see that he hadn't gone through the mop handle when he reached for it. Maybe a little more arc to the motion would have made it clearer.
William Barry Eggington:
Stiff. Center of gravity problems.
Jo Anne Tan:
Funny idea! But the fundamentals are lacking and everything is too stiff. Keep practising!
Animator: Phill Clough
Description: The New employee is tasked with cleaning the toilets. However his boss has some doubts.
(This is my first attempt at the competition)
Experience: 1 Year (Student)
Time taken: 14 days