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I like the idea with having one character in the shadows (at least that's how it looked like on my computer). But I wish there could have been a little bit more movements on them, especially when "Luke" is turning around.
I like the subtle movements. I think you should watch the blinks especially with the first character and also the second character has more of a happy expression and i feel he should have more of a vengeful look especially in the last pose because of the close up. Overall, great job!
William Barry Eggington:
Not too bad. . . good holds. . . subtle but clean motion. Not a whole lot going on so it can't really score super high but nice work.
Jo Anne Tan:
The facial expressions could be a lot stronger, and the first guy's head is twisted around at an impossible angle.
Animator: Madison Porcelli
Description: Norman prepares for a journey guided by an wise elder; but little does he know the elder has other plans...
Experience: I am merely a student
Time taken: 3 weeks