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Awesome work boy. So far so good.
Very nice concept so far and pretty good animation. Loved it.
lip-syncing is a bit off i like what you did its really good
Nice. Finally. Masterpiece.
Nice one :)
Interesting concept, the lip anims are a little tooooo fast/not on par w/ the words. Still, great lighting and models.
KEEP IT UP!
Sajid Ali Mansoori:
Awesome Work .. Good idea..
Animation is really good, try to work on your lipsync!
Really nice small, fluid motions, though I think the lip sync needs a little work.
this is amazing! i just feel the beginning lip sync is a little off and if you were to make the mouth clearer for "I'm am not afraid" and hold the mouth open longer for the second a in "afriad" would make this piece perrrfect! and also just come in on the camera closer and faster for the bee, before his line and not tilt the camera till closer to his second line.
ps. love the glasses touch too, when he adjust them before holding the fly swatter !
William Barry Eggington:
BAM! That is tight. Well done.
niice. one of the few to have a concept that makes sense out of the line. and great animation to boot!
I do think you could work on the lip sync for the guy. I don't know if it's just the sync in the upload/player(except that the sync on the fly seems fine), but regardless, it does seem like you pop between some pretty extreme shapes and could stand to 'phrase' the sync a bit more. Framing through it seems like you've added some shapes you don't need and end up doing some weird things. For instance where he's saying "I'm not afraid", the "I'm" looks almost like it's being played in reverse, opening from a small tight mouth shape and popping out wider almost like he's whistling.
Nice work, top 5
Nice concept. Animation is also nice.
Nice work... Keep it up
Jo Anne Tan:
Nice! The man's head seems to wobble independent of his neck after he finishes speaking though
Nice idea and really great rendering. The lip sync was off a touch, making it feel like the voice of the dad wasn't coming from the actual character, so that bit could use a little more work. Overall nice job.
Animator: Shehroz Sheikh
Description: Father is protecting his son from the most dangerous insect of the world.
Experience: 2 Years
Time taken: 5 days